исправьте ошибки в тексте на английском языке a) Babylon is a successful Russian band, which four friends started when they were at school, in the English version of their website…
Исправьте ошибки в тексте на английском языке a) Babylon is a successful Russian band, which four friends started when they were at school, in the English version of their website there are mistakes in present fenses. Correct the mistakes. SCHOOL IS NOT JUST BOOK LEARNING! Welcome to the Babylon website! Here we are: Viktor, Yuri, Sergey and Dmitry. Well, first a few general things about us and an update about what goes on is going on in the band at the moment, Originally, we are all-coming all come from Sochi near the Caucasus Mountains. Perhaps you know our home town, Sochi is very close to the mountains, so we ae all going skiing every winter, Three of us don't live in Sochi permanently anymore, but we sometimes are going home at weekends, and we often are giving concerts there. Viktor is still going to school in Sochi, Usually he isn't liking school much, Just now he does his final exams, so he's not happy at all. Viktor is playing the bass guitar. Yuri is our lead guitarist and singer. He usually is writing the lyrics for our songs, but for our new single I am writing them. Sergey is on keyboard. I'm on drums, We usually meet twice a week for band practice, but this week we don't moet at all because of Viktor's exams, dlust now we work on new songs for our second album. By the way, Babyton is playing at the Open Air Festival in Moscow on Satueday Ist June, so if you are living close by or if you are in the area, come and see us. Bye now, Dmitry and Babyton.
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a) Babylon is a successful Russian band that four friends started when they were at school. In the English version of their website, there are mistakes in present tenses. Correct the mistakes.
SCHOOL IS NOT JUST BOOK LEARNING!
Welcome to the Babylon website! Here we are: Viktor, Yuri, Sergey, and Dmitry.
Well, first a few general things about us and an update about what is going on in the band at the moment. Originally, we all come from Sochi near the Caucasus Mountains. Perhaps you know our hometown; Sochi is very close to the mountains, so we go skiing every winter.
Three of us don’t live in Sochi permanently anymore, but we sometimes go home on weekends, and we often give concerts there. Viktor still goes to school in Sochi. Usually, he doesn’t like school much. Right now, he is doing his final exams, so he’s not happy at all.
Viktor plays the bass guitar. Yuri is our lead guitarist and singer. He usually writes the lyrics for our songs, but for our new single, I am writing them. Sergey is on keyboard, and I’m on drums. We usually meet twice a week for band practice, but this week we don’t meet at all because of Viktor’s exams. Right now, we are working on new songs for our second album.
By the way, Babylon is playing at the Open Air Festival in Moscow on Saturday, 1st June, so if you live close by or if you are in the area, come and see us. Bye now,
Dmitry and Babylon.
Основные исправления:
- Использование правильных форм глаголов в настоящем времени.
- Исправление ошибок в предлогах и структуре предложений.
- Исправлены ошибки в написании и пунктуации, такие как "babyton" на "Babylon" и "Satueday" на "Saturday".
- Устранены избыточные слова и упрощены конструкции.
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