You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend, Michelle, who writes: My town's so quiet and boring! My friends and I would love to go out more, but there's nothing much to do. What should I do about this problem? Luckily, my friends and I are planning to visit the city near our town soon. Write a letter to Michelle. In your letter: answer her questions; ask 3 questions about her visit to the city. Write 100-140 words. Choose any rubric in Ex. 7 and write your letter/email. Before handing in your piece of writing, review and revise it. Use the questions below. General review strategies Read the letter/email. How does it 'sound"? Does the text flow in an effective way? Does the reader get the required information? Paragraphs Does your first paragraph introduce the reason you are writing? Are your paragraphs clear? Are the paragraphs in a logical order? Does each main body paragraph start with a topic sentence? Do supporting sentences further explain the main idea of the topic sentence? Are there any unnecessary sentences you need to take out? Does the conclusion summarise the content of the letter/email? Style Is the style consistent throughout your letter/email? Is it simple, everyday English? Vocabulary Do you overuse any words? Would synonyms make your letter more interesting?

Question 1

Задача Задача №1655463

А

Аноним

28 сентября 2024 13:29 · публичный вопрос

А

Аноним 28 сентября 2024 13:29

You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend, Michelle, who writes: My town's so quiet and boring! My friends and I would love to go out more, but there's nothing much to do. What should I do about this problem? Luckily, my friends and I are planning to visit the city near our town soon. Write a letter to Michelle. In your letter: answer her questions; ask 3 questions about her visit to the city. Write 100-140 words. Choose any rubric in Ex. 7 and write your letter/email. Before handing in your piece of writing, review and revise it. Use the questions below. General review strategies Read the letter/email. How does it 'sound"? Does the text flow in an effective way? Does the reader get the required information? Paragraphs Does your first paragraph introduce the reason you are writing? Are your paragraphs clear? Are the paragraphs in a logical order? Does each main body paragraph start with a topic sentence? Do supporting sentences further explain the main idea of the topic sentence? Are there any unnecessary sentences you need to take out? Does the conclusion summarise the content of the letter/email? Style Is the style consistent throughout your letter/email? Is it simple, everyday English? Vocabulary Do you overuse any words? Would synonyms make your letter more interesting?

Answer

Dear Michelle,

I can understand how frustrating it can be to feel that your town lacks excitement. To tackle the boredom, you might consider organizing some fun activities with your friends, such as movie nights, game nights, or even starting a book club. Exploring nature trails or parks for a picnic can also be a great way to enjoy your surroundings.

I’m excited to hear about your visit to the city! What places are you planning to visit while you’re there? Are there any specific activities you’re looking forward to trying? Lastly, do you have plans to explore the local food scene?

Looking forward to hearing all about your adventure!

Best wishes,
[Your Name]

Question 2

You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend, Michelle, who writes: My town's so quiet and boring! My friends and I would love to go out more, but there's nothing much to do. What should I do about this problem? Luckily, my friends and I are planning to visit the city near our town soon. Write a letter to Michelle. In your letter: answer her questions; ask 3 questions about her visit to the city. Write 100-140 words. Choose any rubric in Ex. 7 and write your letter/email. Before handing in your piece of writing, review and revise it. Use the questions below. General review strategies Read the letter/email. How does it 'sound"? Does the text flow in an effective way? Does the reader get the required information? Paragraphs Does your first paragraph introduce the reason you are writing? Are your paragraphs clear? Are the paragraphs in a logical order? Does each main body paragraph start with a topic sentence? Do supporting sentences further explain the main idea of the topic sentence? Are there any unnecessary sentences you need to take out? Does the conclusion summarise the content of the letter/email? Style Is the style consistent throughout your letter/email? Is it simple, everyday English? Vocabulary Do you overuse any words? Would synonyms make your letter more interesting?

Answer

Dear Michelle, I can understand how frustrating it can be to feel that your town lacks excitement. To tackle the boredom, you might consider organizing some fun activities with your friends, such as movie nights, game nights, or even starting a book club. Exploring nature trails or parks for a picnic can also be a great way to enjoy your surroundings. I’m excited to hear about your visit to the city! What places are you planning to visit while you’re there? Are there any specific activities you’re looking forward to trying? Lastly, do you have plans to explore the local food scene? Looking forward to hearing all about your adventure! Best wishes, [Your Name]