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10 октября 2024 04:00 · публичный вопрос
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1 Read a corrected copy of Constanza's description and find twelve differences. 2 Which of these errors do you sometimes make? 3 Do you usually check your writing for errors…

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1 Read a corrected copy of Constanza's description and find twelve differences. 2 Which of these errors do you sometimes make? 3 Do you usually check your writing for errors before giving it to a teacher? Hi! My name is Constanza Ximena Jara Castro, but people call me Coti for short. I'm twenty years and single. I born in Valdivia, in the south of Chile, but now I live in Santiago, the capital city. I study journalism in the university and I like very much this course. We are five people in my family - my parents, my two elder sisters and me. We also have got a dog called Kalu. My father's job is a photographer and my mother is teacher. In my free time I like swimming, listening music and seeing friends. In the future I hope to go to USA for do a Master's and my ambition is to work as a journalist for a national newspaper. Исправленный вариант: Hi! My name is Constanza but people call me Coti for short. I'm twenty years old and single. I was born in Valdivia, in the south of Chile, but now I live in Santiago, the capital city. I am studying journalism at university and I like this course very much. There are five people in my family - my parents, my two elder sisters and me. We also have a dog called Kalu. My father is a photographer and my mother is a teacher. In my free time I like swimming, listening to music and seeing friends. In the future I hope to go to the USA to do a Master's and my ambition is to work as a journalist for a national newspaper.

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10 октября 2024 04:00

Конечно! Давайте разберем описание Констанцы и найдем различия между оригинальным текстом и исправленным вариантом. Вот двенадцать отличий:

  1. "I'm twenty years and single" изменено на "I'm twenty years old and single"
  2. "I born" изменено на "I was born"
  3. "I study journalism in the university" изменено на "I am studying journalism at university"
  4. "I like very much this course" изменено на "I like this course very much."
  5. "We are five people" изменено на "There are five people"
  6. "My father's job is a photographer" изменено на "My father is a photographer"
  7. "My mother is teacher" изменено на "My mother is a teacher"
  8. "listening music" изменено на "listening to music"
  9. "to USA for do a Master's" изменено на "to the USA to do a Master's"
  10. "I hope to go to USA" изменено на "I hope to go to the USA"
  11. "for do" изменено на "to do"
  12. Убраны лишние пробелы и изменена пунктуация в некоторых местах.

Теперь отвечая на ваши другие вопросы:

  1. Из этих ошибок, вероятно, вы иногда делаете ошибки, связанные с грамматикой или предлогами, как, например, "to go to the USA" вместо "for go to the USA".

  2. Обычно стоит проверять свои тексты на ошибки перед тем, как передавать их учителю. Это поможет улучшить качество вашей работы и избежать случайных опечаток.

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