, В данном тексте содержится 11 ошибок. Найдите и исправьте их. The town which I was born has changed greatly over the last fifty years. Now there is a modern shopping center on the place that my school used to be and all the children whose went there have grown up and moved away. The local cinema, that was built several years ago, used to be a dance hall which big bands played. The park, where was my favourite place as a child, is now a car park. Some things are still the same though. Mrs Jones, whom is now seventy years old, still lives in the High Street and Mr Jones still owns the baker’s shop, that two sons now work instead of him. The hospital where I was born in is still standing, although it is now much bigger than it was at the time which I was born. On the day which my family and I left our town we were all very sad.
В этом тексте действительно есть несколько ошибок. Давайте рассмотрим их и внесем исправления:
The town which I was born → The town where I was born
Ошибка заключается в том, что используется неправильный союз. Правильным будет «where».on the place that my school used to be → in the place where my school used to be
Нужно использовать предлог "in" вместо "on".all the children whose went there → all the children who went there
Неправильная форма притяжательного местоимения; правильнее использовать «who».the local cinema, that was built → the local cinema, which was built
Здесь необходимо использовать «which», так как это относительное местоимение.the park, where was my favourite place → the park, which was my favourite place
Следует заменить «where» на «which».is now a car park (на практике проверяемое содержание) – конструкция остается правильной, ошибок нет.
whom is now seventy years old → who is now seventy years old
Правильное относительное местоимение для человека — «who».the baker’s shop, that two sons now work → the baker’s shop, where two sons now work
Вместо «that» следует использовать «where».the hospital where I was born in → the hospital where I was born
Убрать предлог "in" в конце предложения, он лишний.much bigger than it was at the time which I was born → much bigger than it was at the time when I was born
Нужно заменить «which» на «when».the day which my family and I left → the day when my family and I left
Здесь также лучше использовать «when».
Теперь переписываем исправленный текст:
The town where I was born has changed greatly over the last fifty years. Now there is a modern shopping center in the place where my school used to be and all the children who went there have grown up and moved away. The local cinema, which was built several years ago, used to be a dance hall where big bands played. The park, which was my favourite place as a child, is now a car park. Some things are still the same though. Mrs. Jones, who is now seventy years old, still lives in the High Street and Mr. Jones still owns the baker’s shop, where two sons now work instead of him. The hospital where I was born is still standing, although it is now much bigger than it was at the time when I was born. On the day when my family and I left our town, we were all very sad.
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