Here's a condensed version of your talk about appearance:
Appearance is a significant topic in our lives; many people strive to look good and fashionable, believing it is crucial for success. Generally, boys seem less concerned about their appearance compared to girls, who often prioritize fashion and looking better than others. However, I believe that character is more important than appearance. Success in life requires qualities like intelligence, kindness, and reliability.
That's all I want to say about appearance.
Let me know if you need further modifications!