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Вопрос от химия ® 25 февраля 2025 02:49

Грамматику исправить Last Friday, our school organized an exciting sports day that brought together students, teachers, and parents. The weather was fine and it was sunning. Events included running races, soccer matches, and a thrilling relay race. I participated in the 100-meter dash and came first. Alex came second, and Roma came third.Afterwards , there was a 150 m race. Masha for breakin the school record in the race. There were a lot of other boys and girls who set their on records in different races. Everyone cheered for their classmates, creating an incredible atmosphere of support As soon as the athletics competitions ended, the football competitions began, followed by basketball and volleyball competitions. 8В took 1st place, 8Д took 3rd place, 8Е took 2nd place. It was fun and funny. The end we did the sack race and our favourite three-legged race. It was funny when we fell over while we were running. We all enjoyed it. It was a really fun afternoon. I wish it would be like this more often.

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25 февраля 2025 02:49

Вот исправленный текст с учётом грамматических ошибок и мелких недочётов:


Last Friday, our school organized an exciting sports day that brought together students, teachers, and parents. The weather was fine and it was sunny. Events included running races, soccer matches, and a thrilling relay race. I participated in the 100-meter dash and came first. Alex came second, and Roma came third. Afterwards, there was a 150-meter race. Masha broke the school record in the race. There were a lot of other boys and girls who set their own records in different races.

Everyone cheered for their classmates, creating an incredible atmosphere of support. As soon as the athletics competitions ended, the football competitions began, followed by basketball and volleyball competitions. 8B took 1st place, 8D took 3rd place, and 8E took 2nd place. It was fun and funny.

At the end, we did the sack race and our favourite three-legged race. It was funny when we fell over while we were running. We all enjoyed it.

It was a really fun afternoon. I wish it would be like this more often.


Объяснение исправлений:

  1. "sunning" на "sunny": Правильное слово для описания погоды — "sunny" (солнечный).
  2. "Afterwards ," на "Afterwards,": Убрана лишняя пробел перед запятой.
  3. "150 m race" на "150-meter race": Правильный формат для обозначения дистанции в английском языке — "метровый" с дефисом.
  4. "Masha for breakin the school record" на "Masha broke the school record": Ошибка в грамматике исправлена, добавлено корректное глагольное время (прошедшее время — "broke").
  5. "their on records" на "their own records": Исправлено на правильную форму "own" (свой).
  6. "8В" на "8B", "8Д" на "8D", "8Е" на "8E": Латиница вместо кириллицы для обозначения классов.
  7. "At the end": Исправлено на "At the end" для большей естественности.
  8. Добавлены запятые для корректного разделения предложений и уточнений.

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грамматику исправить Last Friday, our school organized an exciting sports day that brought together students, teachers, and parents. The weather was fine and it was sunning. Events included running races, soccer matches, and a thrilling relay race. I participated in the 100-meter dash and came first. Alex came second, and Roma came third.Afterwards , there was a 150 m race. Masha for breakin the school record in the race. There were a lot of other boys and girls who set their on records in different races. Everyone cheered for their classmates, creating an incredible atmosphere of support As soon as the athletics competitions ended, the football competitions began, followed by basketball and volleyball competitions. 8В took 1st place, 8Д took 3rd place, 8Е took 2nd place. It was fun and funny. The end we did the sack race and our favourite three-legged race. It was funny when we fell over while we were running. We all enjoyed it. It was a really fun afternoon. I wish it would be like this more often.
Вот исправленный текст с учётом грамматических ошибок и мелких недочётов: --- Last Friday, our school organized an exciting sports day that brought together students, teachers, and parents. The weather was fine and it was sunny. Events included running races, soccer matches, and a thrilling relay race. I participated in the 100-meter dash and came first. Alex came second, and Roma came third. Afterwards, there was a 150-meter race. Masha broke the school record in the race. There were a lot of other boys and girls who set their own records in different races. Everyone cheered for their classmates, creating an incredible atmosphere of support. As soon as the athletics competitions ended, the football competitions began, followed by basketball and volleyball competitions. 8B took 1st place, 8D took 3rd place, and 8E took 2nd place. It was fun and funny. At the end, we did the sack race and our favourite three-legged race. It was funny when we fell over while we were running. We all enjoyed it. It was a really fun afternoon. I wish it would be like this more often. --- ### Объяснение исправлений: 1. **"sunning" на "sunny"**: Правильное слово для описания погоды — "sunny" (солнечный). 2. **"Afterwards ," на "Afterwards,"**: Убрана лишняя пробел перед запятой. 3. **"150 m race" на "150-meter race"**: Правильный формат для обозначения дистанции в английском языке — "метровый" с дефисом. 4. **"Masha for breakin the school record" на "Masha broke the school record"**: Ошибка в грамматике исправлена, добавлено корректное глагольное время (прошедшее время — "broke"). 5. **"their on records" на "their own records"**: Исправлено на правильную форму "own" (свой). 6. **"8В" на "8B", "8Д" на "8D", "8Е" на "8E"**: Латиница вместо кириллицы для обозначения классов. 7. **"At the end"**: Исправлено на "At the end" для большей естественности. 8. Добавлены запятые для корректного разделения предложений и уточнений. Если у тебя есть дополнительные вопросы по тексту или другой материал, не стесняйся спрашивать!