Исправить ошибки Dear TIM Thanks a lot for your last e-mail, i'm sorry i havenot answered earlier but l was realy busy with my school. I'm happy you are ok In your e-mail you…
Исправить ошибки Dear TIM Thanks a lot for your last e-mail, i'm sorry i havenot answered earlier but l was realy busy with my school. I'm happy you are ok In your e-mail you asked me about how ussually I spend my holiday. Usually I spend my holidays With my friends, we always go for a walk also I like spend time with my family. At all ilike mostly spring holiday, I really like them bacauce my sister visit me. About my last summer holidays, I was at summer camp and also I was at Dagestan with my family it was very cool! Well, I'd better go now because my mum asked to help her with the washing up Write back soon!
Ошибки в тексте:
грамматические ошибки:
- "havenot" - должно быть "have not"
- "real" - должно быть "really"
- "ussually" - должно быть "usually"
- "ilike" - должно быть "I like"
- "bacauce" - должно быть "because"
- "siblings" - должно быть "sister"
пунктуационные и стилистические ошибки:
- отсутствует точка в конце второго предложения
- "With" - "with"
- "ilike" - "I like"
- "bacauce" - "because"
- "siblings" - "sister"
- "Write back soon!" - лучше написать "Please write back soon!"
Исправленный текст:
Dear TIM,
Thanks a lot for your last e-mail. I'm sorry I have not answered earlier, but I was really busy with my school. I'm happy you are okay.
In your e-mail, you asked me how I usually spend my holidays. Usually, I spend my holidays with my friends. We always go for a walk, and I also like to spend time with my family. I mostly enjoy spring holidays because my sister visits me. As for my last summer holiday, I was at a summer camp and also in Dagestan with my family; it was very cool!
Well, I'd better go now because my mum asked me to help her with the washing up. Please write back soon!
Best regards, [Your Name]
