Конечно! Вот подробное решение:
Текст с пропусками и объяснениями:
Edward Yudenich is one of the (YOUNG) conductors in the world.
- (YOUNG) — прилагательное. В данном случае, нужно образовать прилагательное от слова "Young", чтобы описать "один из молодых дирижёров".
- Правильная форма: YOUNG (здесь уже правильно, так как нужно оставить слово в форме прилагательного).
Some people say that he is a real star coming from heaven with an angelic face and when they see him conducting an orchestra — (THEY) eyes fill with tears.
- (THEY) — подлежащее. Почему "THEY"?
- Но правильно: "their eyes" — "ихним глазами", потому что слово "their" — притяжательное местоимение, связанное с "they".
- В оригинале нужно вставить слово, которое делает "глаза" подлежащим — "their".
- Поэтому: their.
Edward began studying music at the age of four. The (ONE) time he conducted an orchestra was at the age of seven in Tashkent, since then, he has conducted many orchestras in different countries.
- (ONE) — порядковое число.
- Правильная форма: one (числительное).
It is a real pleasure to watch him conducting because he has complete control over the orchestra and gives a great performance as he has the whole piece remembered.
- Здесь пропуск не требуется, предложение понятно.
Edward started playing the violin at the age of five. Edward (SPEND) his early years in Uzbekistan but now lives in Moscow with his family.
- (SPEND) — глагол, нужно поставить в прошедшее время, чтобы отразить факт прошедших лет.
- Правильная форма: spent.
Music takes up a lot of (HE) time.
- (HE) — притяжательное местоимение, нужно "his".
- Правильная форма: his.
He practices several (HOUR) a day and also spends much time learning music scores for conducting.
- (HOUR) — существительное во множественном числе.
- Нужно образовать множественное число: hours.
In his free time Edward reads, (WATCH) TV and plays computer games.
- (WATCH) — глагол, одновременный с "reads" и в таком контексте лучше использовать герундий, чтобы сделать перечисление однородных действий.
- Правильная форма: watching.
He is also fond of travelling.
- В этом предложении всё правильно.
Итоговая заполненная версия с объяснениями:
Edward Yudenich is one of the YOUNG conductors in the world.
Some people say that he is a real star coming from heaven with an angelic face and when they see him conducting an orchestra — their eyes fill with tears.
Edward began studying music at the age of four. The one time he conducted an orchestra was at the age of seven in Tashkent, since then, he has conducted many orchestras in different countries. It is a real pleasure to watch him conducting because he has complete control over the orchestra and gives a great performance as he has the whole piece remembered. Edward started playing the violin at the age of five. Edward spent his early years in Uzbekistan but now lives in Moscow with his family. Music takes up a lot of his time. He practices several hours a day and also spends much time learning music scores for conducting. In his free time Edward reads, watching TV and plays computer games. He is also fond of travelling.
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