When Tom GROW UP , the video game industry was developing. Video games were an important part of Tom's childhood. Although they are now adults, millions of young people of Tom's…
When Tom GROW UP , the video game industry was developing. Video games were an important part of Tom's childhood. Although they are now adults, millions of young people of Tom's generation still love playing video games. In the late 1970s, lots of companies began to produce video game machines that could be played at home. The SUCCESSFUL of these early video games were made by Atari. Tom BEAR in 1980. This was the year that Atari RELEASE the home version of 'Space Invaders'. When he was about eight years old, Tom asked parents for a video game console. Children all around the world were doing the same thing. Nintendo was the most
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When Tom grew up, the video game industry was developing. Video games were an important part of Tom's childhood. Although they are now adults, millions of young people of Tom's generation still love playing video games.
In the late 1970s, lots of companies began to produce video game machines that could be played at home. The most successful of these early video games were made by Atari. Tom was born in 1980. This was the year that Atari released the home version of 'Space Invaders'. When he was about eight years old, Tom asked his parents for a video game console. Children all around the world were doing the same thing. Nintendo was the most...
Объяснение правил:
"GROW UP" → "grew up"
В оригинале использована неправильная форма глагола. Для описания прошедшего времени, когда Том взрослел, правильная форма — прошедшее время (Past Simple): "grew up"."Tom BEAR in 1980" → "Tom was born in 1980"
Глагол "be" в прошедшем времени — "was" или "were". Провозглашение о дате рождения лучше выражать через "was born"."RELEASE" → "released"
В прошедшем времени это глагол-слово, поэтому используем "released"."The SUCCESSFUL" → "The most successful"
В английском при сравнении мы говорим "most successful", а не "successful" с артиклем.Время и контекст сохраняются благодаря правильным формам глаголов.
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