This summer I went to my grandmothers, first I went with my sister in a minibus, it was not very comfortable and I was very tired after the trip. to the 2nd grandmother I went by car and already with more comfortable conditions, it was soft and calm, the whole time of the road I listened to music. I was in the village for about a month, I am very happy that I was able to see my relatives and have fun from the heart сделай этот текст более граматичным под уровень A1 и сделай так чтобы он был на 80 слов

Вот упрощённый вариант на уровне A1 (примерно 80 слов): This summer I went to visit my grandmothers. First I went with my sister in a minibus. It was not very comfortable and I was very tired after the trip. Then I visited the second grandmother by car. The ride was more comfortable. It was smooth and calm. I listened to music the whole way. I stayed in the village for about a month. I am very happy that I could see my relatives and have fun from the heart. Краткое объяснение изменений: - Использованы простые предложения и базовые слова, подходящие для A1. - Все события переданы в прошедшем времени (went, visited, stayed). - Применены понятные связки: First, Then, The ride was. - Упрощена структура предложений и избеганы сложные конструкции. - Текст сохраняет смысл исходника, но стал более ясным и доступным.