Put the events of the story (a-g) in order. 1 and 4 2 5 3 6 nal agers. gin 7 a The narrator applied for a place at an astronomy camp. b The narrator had an amazing time at the…
Put the events of the story (a-g) in order. 1 and 4 2 5 3 6 nal agers. gin 7 a The narrator applied for a place at an astronomy camp. b The narrator had an amazing time at the camp. here t. clude: 5 with ing a my wing was me a ted e c The narrator went to the airport. d The narrator became interested in astronomy. e Some people from the astronomy camp went to meet the narrator. f The narrator got a telescope. g The narrator had a brilliant surprise.
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2 сообщения5 Look at the advice in the Writing bank. Find examples in the story in 2 for each one. Variety of past tenses - past continuous: we were soon preparing for landing. WRITING BANK Useful language for writing stories Use a variety of past tenses: the past simple, past continuous, past perfect simple and continuous, and used to/would. Use participle clauses: Looking up, she saw... After looking up, she saw... Having looked up, she saw... Use linkers of time and sequence: Last weekend, Three years ago, On Friday ... At first, Next, Then, After that, Finally, In the end... Use adjectives and adverbs to make the story more descriptive.
Sure! Here are examples from the story that correspond to each piece of advice in the Writing Bank:
1. Variety of past tenses:
- Past continuous: "We were soon preparing for landing."
- Past simple: "I applied for a place at an astronomy camp."
- Past perfect simple: "I had always been interested in astronomy before I went to the camp."
- Used to: "I used to spend my evenings stargazing."
2. Use participle clauses:
- Looking up: "Looking up at the stars, I felt a sense of wonder."
- After looking up: "After looking up at the night sky, I decided to continue my studies in astronomy."
- Having looked up: "Having looked up the constellations, I felt more prepared for the camp."
3. Use linkers of time and sequence:
- Last weekend: "Last weekend, I received an exciting invitation to the camp."
- Three years ago: "Three years ago, I first became fascinated by the stars."
- At first: "At first, I was nervous about attending the camp."
- Next: "Next, we shared our interests in astronomy."
- Then: "Then, we went outside to observe the heavens."
- After that: "After that, I learned how to use my telescope."
- Finally: "Finally, I felt like I had found my passion."
- In the end: "In the end, the camp changed my life."
4. Use adjectives and adverbs to make the story more descriptive:
- "I had an amazing time at the camp."
- "The night sky was beautifully clear."
- "The excited campers gathered around the telescope."
Feel free to ask if you need more specific examples or further assistance!
