I live in a small town near a big city, in a nine storey block of flast. My flat is on the fifth floor. On the yard there is a playground and a few benches. The streets busy,…
I live in a small town near a big city, in a nine storey block of flast. My flat is on the fifth floor. On the yard there is a playground and a few benches. The streets busy, because most cars use the main road. Along my street there are a bakery, a small supermarket and a post office. At the weekend the street becomes livelier: people walk with their children and ride bikes. My neighbors are friendly and always ready to help. Sometimes the neighbor downstairs make noise late at night, but we never quarrel about it. l like my district because it is calm green and full of people l know. упрости текст, оставив 9 предложений.
Упрощённый текст (ровно 9 предложений):
- I live in a small town near a big city.
- My flat is on the fifth floor of a nine-storey building.
- In the yard, there is a playground and some benches.
- The street is busy because most cars use the main road.
- My street has a bakery, a small supermarket and a post office.
- At the weekend, the street is livelier: people walk with their children and ride bikes.
- My neighbours are friendly and always ready to help.
- Sometimes the neighbour downstairs makes noise late at night, but we never argue about it.
- I like my area because it is quiet, green and full of people I know.
Как это сделано:
- В оригинале уже 9 предложений, поэтому сохраняем по одной главной мысли на предложение.
- Упрощаем слова и конструкции:
a nine storey block of flast→a nine-storey building,On the yard→In the yard,quarrel→argue,district→area. - Исправляем грамматику:
The street is busy,the neighbour … makes noise,I like.
Проверка: в готовом тексте 9 пунктов — 9 предложений; все основные факты сохранены.
