Сделай сочинение на английском с 200 слов, живым как будто это делал 6 классник и сделай с ошибками на тему "глобальное

Вот сочинение — около 215 слов, простыми фразами, с типичными ошибками шестиклассника (я их потом перечислил, чтобы ты знал, где именно они спрятаны).

Global Warming

Global warming is a very big problem today. I think everybody hear about it but not everybody understand how serious it is.

The Earth is getting hotter and hotter every year. In summer it is so hot that you can't go outside. Scientists say it is because of people. We burn a lot of coal and oil, and factories make a lot of smoke. This smoke go up to the sky and stay there like a blanket. Because of this blanket, our planet can't cool down.

Also people cut down forests. Trees are very important because they clean the air. When people cut them, animals lose their homes. It is very sad.

Because of global warming, ice in the Arctic is melting. Polar bears can't find food and they swim a lot. I saw a video about it and I was really upset. Also the level of the ocean is rising, and some countries can be under water in the future.

What can we do? We can use bikes instead of cars, we can turn off the light, and we can plant trees. It is not difficult but everybody must do it.

I think global warming is the most important problem in the world. If we don't do nothing, our planet will be in big danger.

Какие ошибки заложены (их 5):

1. everybody hear → hears (3-е лицо ед. ч.)
2. everybody understand → understands
3. This smoke go up… and stay → goes, stays
4. If we don't do nothing → двойное отрицание, надо don't do anything
5. cut them — лучше cut them down (мелочь, но заметная)

Если учитель просит без ошибок — скажи, я дам исправленную версию и покажу, как меняются эти пять мест.

Вот вариант примерно на 200 слов. Ошибки оставил специально — как в обычной ученической работе, поэтому текст выглядит живым.

Global Warming

Global warming is a very big problem for our planet. Our planet is our home. It is when the Earth becomes more hotter because of people. There is many factories and cars in the world, and they make a lot of dirty smoke. This smoke go into the air and make the greenhouse effect. Because of this, ice in the Arctic is melt and the weather is changing.

Also people cut down forests. Trees is very important because they give us oxygen. When people cut them, animals lose they homes. Some people throws rubbish into rivers and parks, and it is very bad. I think we must to save nature, because our future depend on it.

We can help our planet too. For example, we should not to leave rubbish in the forest, we can use less plastic bags and we must turn off the lights when we go out. At school my teacher say that we should plant trees and recycle paper and glass. It is not difficult, but it is very useful.

Global warming is a really serious problem, but I believe that if we all help, we can make the world better. Let's protect our planet together!

Если нужно, могу отдельно показать, какие места здесь стоит исправить, чтобы получилась версия без ошибок.

Готово — теперь ошибки именно в написании слов (орфография), а не только в грамматике. Объём — около 190 слов.

Global Worming

Global worming is a very importent problem for our planet. It is when the Earth becomes more hotter becouse of people. There is many factories and cars in the world, and they make a lot of dirty smoke. This smoke go into the air and make the greenhouse effect. Becouse of this, ice in the Artic is melting and the wheather is changing.

Also people cut down forrests. Trees is very importent becouse they give us oxigen. When people cut them, animals lose they homes. Some people throws rubish into rivers and parks, and it is very bad. I think we must save nature, becouse our future depend on it.

We can help our planet too. For example, we should not leave rubish in the forrest, we can use less plastic bags and we must turn off the lights when we go out. At school my teacher say that we should plant trees and recicle paper and glass. It is not difficult, but it is very useful.

Global worming is a really serious problem, but I beleive that if we all help, we can make the world better. Let's protect our planet together!

Ошибки в словах, которые здесь заложены:

• worming → warming (в заголовке и в тексте — это самая заметная ошибка)
• importent → important (2 раза)
• becouse → because (3 раза)
• Artic → Arctic
• wheather → weather
• forrests / forrest → forests / forest
• oxigen → oxygen
• rubish → rubbish (2 раза)
• recicle → recycle
• beleive → believe

Плюс по грамматике остались: There is many, This smoke go, Trees is, they homes, people throws, our future depend, teacher say, more hotter.

Если учитель просит «живые, но не слишком», скажи — уберу половину ошибок, чтобы работа выглядела правдоподобнее для шестиклассника.