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Portfolio: Imagine you saw one of the monsters described in the text. Spend five minutes writing your diary entry for the day of the sighting.

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Краткий ответ: вот готовая дневниковая запись — в ней есть все четыре пункта задания.

Saturday, 15th June

Dear Diary,

Yesterday was the strangest day of my life. I was walking along the shore of Loch Ness and taking photos of the sunset when I noticed that the water had suddenly become calm.

Then I saw a huge dark shape rise to the surface. It had a long neck, a small head and two bright eyes. I could not believe it — it was the Loch Ness Monster! It looked at me for a few seconds and then dived under the water.

My hands were shaking and my heart was pounding. I was scared, but also excited. I managed to take one photo, but it was too blurry.

After that, I ran to the village and told my friends what I had seen. They laughed and said I had imagined it, but I know it was real. I will never forget that day.

Как построить похожую запись

  1. Где ты был и что делал — фон события, поэтому используй Past Continuous:
    I was walking along the shore...

  2. Что именно увидел — конкретные детали, Past Simple:
    I saw a huge dark shape... It had a long neck...

  3. Что почувствовал — опиши эмоции и реакцию тела:
    I was scared. My hands were shaking.

  4. Что случилось потом — заверши последовательность:
    I ran to the village and told my friends.

Проверка: дата и обращение есть, события идут по порядку, чувства названы, все четыре пункта закрыты. Если в тексте был другой монстр, замени его название и описание — структура останется такой же.