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Writing
8 Portfolio: Imagine you saw one of the monsters described in the text. Spend five minutes writing your diary entry for the day of the sighting. Write: where you were & what you were doing, exactly what you saw, how you felt, what happened next. Read your entry to the class.
Краткий ответ: вот готовая дневниковая запись — в ней есть все четыре пункта задания.
Saturday, 15th June
Dear Diary,
Yesterday was the strangest day of my life. I was walking along the shore of Loch Ness and taking photos of the sunset when I noticed that the water had suddenly become calm.
Then I saw a huge dark shape rise to the surface. It had a long neck, a small head and two bright eyes. I could not believe it — it was the Loch Ness Monster! It looked at me for a few seconds and then dived under the water.
My hands were shaking and my heart was pounding. I was scared, but also excited. I managed to take one photo, but it was too blurry.
After that, I ran to the village and told my friends what I had seen. They laughed and said I had imagined it, but I know it was real. I will never forget that day.
Как построить похожую запись
Где ты был и что делал — фон события, поэтому используй Past Continuous:
I was walking along the shore...Что именно увидел — конкретные детали, Past Simple:
I saw a huge dark shape... It had a long neck...Что почувствовал — опиши эмоции и реакцию тела:
I was scared. My hands were shaking.Что случилось потом — заверши последовательность:
I ran to the village and told my friends.
Проверка: дата и обращение есть, события идут по порядку, чувства названы, все четыре пункта закрыты. Если в тексте был другой монстр, замени его название и описание — структура останется такой же.