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11 часов назад · публичный вопрос
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WRITE ✍️ APOLOGY LETTER 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Your neighbor has written to you to complain about your dog barking while you are away at work. Write a letter to your…

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WRITE ✍️ APOLOGY LETTER 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Your neighbor has written to you to complain about your dog barking while you are away at work. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: * offer your neighbor a sincere apology * explain the reason why the dog is barking * explain what actions you will take to solve this problem.

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11 часов назад

Quick answer: A good apology letter should do three things clearly: apologize sincerely → explain the cause → give practical solutions. Here is a model answer.


Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to offer my sincere apology for the disturbance caused by my dog’s barking while I am at work. I completely understand how frustrating this must have been, and I am truly sorry.

The reason for the barking is that my dog suffers from separation anxiety. He is a rescue dog and becomes very anxious when he is left alone, so he barks to relieve his stress. I did not realize how much this was affecting you until I received your message, and I feel responsible for not addressing it sooner.

I have already arranged to speak with my vet and a dog behaviorist. I will also hire a dog walker to visit him during the day, leave him with calming toys, and keep him in a quiet room away from the shared wall. In addition, I will set up a camera so that I can monitor him and come home if necessary. If the barking continues to bother you, please call me on [phone number], and I will act immediately.

Please accept my apologies once again. I hope we can resolve this quickly and restore peace between us.

Sincerely,
[Your name]


Why this works

  • Paragraph 1: directly apologizes and shows you understand the neighbor’s problem.
  • Paragraph 2: gives one clear reason — separation anxiety — without sounding defensive.
  • Paragraph 3: offers specific, believable actions, not just “I will try to stop it.”
  • Closing: repeats the apology and sounds cooperative.

Quick check: the apology is sincere, the reason is explained, and several concrete solutions are included.

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3 обзац поменьше и вопреки все б1 и не меняй 1обзац

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Первый абзац оставил дословно, остальное упростил до уровня B1, третий абзац сделал короче.


Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to offer my sincere apology for the disturbance caused by my dog’s barking while I am at work. I completely understand how frustrating this must have been, and I am truly sorry.

The reason for the barking is that my dog feels very nervous when he is alone. He is a rescue dog, and he barks because he is afraid. I did not know this was such a problem for you, and I am sorry I did not act earlier.

I have already spoken to my vet and a dog trainer. I will ask a dog walker to visit him during the day, leave him some toys, and keep him in a quiet room. I will also check him with a camera. If he is still noisy, please call me on [phone number], and I will come home.

Please accept my apology again. I hope we can solve this problem soon.

Sincerely,
[Your name]

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