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21 час назад · публичный вопрос
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сделай описание картинки под номером E по образцу из картинки слева

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21 час назад

Вот описание картинки E по шаблону:

I'd like to describe picture E.

1. The place
The picture shows a flea market. In the picture I can see a lot of people and stalls with different things. It was probably taken outside.

2. The action
In this picture the action is taking place at a flea market. Looking at these people I get the impression that they are looking at the goods and talking. The man is standing and looking at the plates. The people are walking and buying things. The weather is sunny and warm.

3. The appearance of the person
The man looks like he is about 40 years old. He has got dark eyes and short dark hair. He is wearing a black T-shirt and dark trousers. I guess he is quiet and kind.

4. Whether you like the picture or not
I like the picture because the atmosphere is peaceful and lively.

5. Why
I like this picture as it is bright and colourful, full of positive emotions. It makes me think of summer.

Как построить похожее описание

  1. Начни с места: The picture shows... / In the picture I can see...
  2. Опиши действие: In this picture the action is taking place in... / Looking at these people I get the impression that they are... Используй Present Continuous для действий: is standing, are walking.
  3. Выбери одного человека на переднем плане и опиши внешность: He looks like he is about... / He has got... eyes and... hair / He is wearing...
  4. Вырази отношение: I like / don't like the picture because...
  5. Объясни причину: I like this picture as it is... / It makes me think of...

Проверка: все пять пунктов шаблона использованы; для действий стоит Present Continuous, для внешности — has got и is wearing, для отношения — I like... because...

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Сделай описание картинки E по образцу на фото справа (вкратце, простыми словами, примерно 60 слов)

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Вот краткое описание (около 60 слов):

I'd like to describe picture E. The picture shows a flea market outside. I can see people and stalls. Looking at them, I get the impression that they are talking. The man looks about 40. He has got short dark hair and is wearing a black T-shirt. I like the picture because it is bright. It makes me think of summer.

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Опиши людей в целом, без описания конкретного человека и не говори про себя, а расскажи в целом про картину, в остальном оставь всё также

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Описание картинки E (около 55 слов):

I'd like to describe picture E. The picture shows a flea market. There are many people and stalls with different things. The people are walking, talking and looking at the goods. They seem friendly and relaxed. The weather is sunny and warm, so it was probably taken outside. The picture is bright and colourful. It creates a pleasant summer mood.

Что изменилось

  • Вместо описания конкретного мужчины — общее описание людей: The people are walking, talking and looking at the goods. They seem friendly and relaxed. (Present Continuous для действий, seem для впечатления).
  • Убрал личное мнение (I like..., It makes me think...) — вместо него безличная оценка: It creates a pleasant summer mood.
  • Вступление I'd like to describe picture E оставил, так как это стандартная фраза-зачин из образца. Если её тоже нужно убрать, начни сразу так: The picture shows a flea market...