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«Shawn Mendes is a young Canadian musician who became famous in 2013 after posting short YouTube videos of himself singing lines from popular songs. A producer noticed his talent and offered him a contract, and in April 2015 his first album Handwritten topped the charts in the USA and Canada. Since then, he has performed with Taylor Swift and won two Teen Choice Awards. He is determined to succeed.»
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Young Canadian musician Shawn Mendes became famous in 2013 after posting YouTube videos of himself singing. A producer offered him a contract, and his first album Handwritten topped the US and Canadian charts in 2015; since then, he has performed with Taylor Swift and won two Teen Choice Awards.
Как я сократил:
- Оставил главную линию: кто герой, чем прославился и какие этапы карьеры важны.
- Убрал детали, без которых смысл не меняется: short, lines from popular songs, noticed his talent, April, determined to succeed.
- Соединил оставшиеся факты в два предложения и сформулировал их компактнее, не добавляя нового.
Проверка: сохранены имя, страна, 2013 год, YouTube, контракт, 2015 год, альбом Handwritten, США и Канада, Taylor Swift и две награды.
