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Marie Curie was a famous scientist born in Poland. She moved to Paris to study physics and math, where she met her husband, Pierre Curie. Together, they discovered radium and won a Nobel Prize. After her husband's death, she won a second Nobel Prize in Chemistry and helped soldiers during World War I by designing mobile X-ray machines. She died in 1934 from radiation poisoning, leaving a great legacy as the first woman to win two Nobel Prizes.
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Famous Polish-born scientist Marie Curie moved to Paris to study physics and math, where she met her husband, Pierre Curie. They discovered radium and won a Nobel Prize; after his death, she won a second Nobel Prize in Chemistry and helped WWI soldiers with mobile X-ray machines. She died of radiation poisoning in 1934, leaving a legacy as the first woman to win two Nobel Prizes.
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- убраны слова, не добавляющие новых фактов: Together, great;
- After her husband's death заменено на after his death — понятно из предыдущего предложения;
- World War I → WWI, by designing → with;
- предложения объединены, но сохранены все ключевые факты: Польша, Париж, физика и математика, Пьер Кюри, радий, два Нобелевских приза, Первая мировая война, мобильные рентген-аппараты, 1934 год и радиационное отравление.
Проверка: имена, числа и основные события не изменены. Сильнее сокращать уже рискованно — начнут пропадать важные детали.
