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People come to Belarus to see unique architecture, learn about the Belarusian culture, enjoy the nature and see top sports competitions. In addition, holidays in Belarus can include a good shopping programme.
Belarus has shops of all kinds: large malls, department stores, markets, and fairs.
In Minsk there are some popular shopping malls that offer a wide choice of goods: the famous GUM and TsUM department stores, Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall, Arena City shopping centres, etc. They sell everything from socks to dictionaries.
For more traditional shopping, go to one of the many local markets. The most popular is Komarovsky Market in Minsk, one of the city's oldest food markets.
Tourists often buy Belarusian brands known for their high quality. They include clothes, shoes, cosmetics, home textiles, sweets and local Belarusian drinks. Two well-known brands making chocolates are Kommunarka and Spartak.
Traditional souvenirs include dolls in national costumes, hand-painted wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins.
C. Markets. D. Souvenirs.
F. Department stores. G. Supermarkets.
[рукописно: Supermarkets]
- The most popular stores for buying food — from delicious local products to Italian pasta and French cheese — are supermarkets.
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The country has large supermarket chains: Green, Euroopt, Gippo, Korona, Sosedi, etc. and smaller regional supermarkets. Supermarkets sell Belarusian products, ready-made dishes and imported (импортные/[неразборчиво]) foods like fruits and veggies, groceries, cheeses, olives, etc.
Supermarkets — [рукописный заголовок]
- The three central department stores in Minsk are GUM, TSUM and the Nemiga department store. There you can buy everything in one place — from clothes and cosmetics to household devices and gardening tools. Over 70 % of goods sold in the state department stores are Belarusian brands.
[Рисунок: фотография здания универмага]
Smaller replicas of the capital's department stores can be found almost in any city of Belarus. They are Univermag Gomel, Univermag Vitebsk, TSUM in Brest, Nieman in Grodno, Univermag Tsentralny in Mogilev.
Department stores — [рукописный заголовок]
Malls — [рукописный заголовок]
- Modern shopping malls with different types of shops, food courts, cinemas and other entertainments (skating rinks, bowling, carting, concert halls, art spaces) are growing around Belarusian cities like grass in May. The most popular malls in Minsk are Arena City, Dana Mall, Galileo and Gallery Minsk. Regional cities in Belarus also have large malls: Park City in Mogilev, Gallery Grand in Brest or Green Centre in Vitebsk.
[Рисунок: фотография торгового центра с надписью GALLERY MINSK]
Opening hours — [рукописный заголовок]
- Stores and malls in Belarus are open seven days a week and rarely close for holidays. Generally, the opening hours are from 9 a.m. until 9 p.m. Outside Minsk and other main cities, many shops still close on Sundays. The shopping malls are often open until 10 p.m. — so you have lots of time to hit the famous stores.
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[Рисунок: фотография здания рынка, на вывеске «КОМАРОВСКИЙ РЫНОК»]
Markets — [рукописный заголовок]
- To come to know the people and the culture of the country, visit the local fresh food market. Small food markets are open in most towns and cities, but the Belarusian landmark is Komarovka — a huge food market in Minsk with its unique history. The building itself is unique and it has a set of original bronze statues in front of it.
Brands — [рукописный заголовок]
- Belarusian brands sell high-quality products all over the world. The well-known Elema, Kupalinka and Svitanak sell clothes; Marko, Belvest sell footwear; Krystal and Zorka are well-known jewellery brands, Bielita, Markel, LuxVisage sell cosmetics, etc. The famous food brands are Spartak, Kommunarka (chocolate), Savushkin product, Babushkina krynka, Brest-Litovsk (dairy products) and Santa Bremor (fish).
[Рисунок: обёртка шоколада с портретом девочки, надпись [неразборчиво]]
b) Give short answers.
What are the most popular types of shops for buying food in Belarus? [рукописно: Supermarkets and markets]
What country are 70 % of TSUM goods made in? [рукописно: In Belarus]
What city is the Gallery Grand shopping centre in? [рукописно: In Brest]
Do shops and malls usually work on holidays? [рукописно: Yes, they do.]
What time do most shopping malls in Belarus close? [рукописно: At 10 pm]
What can you see in front of Komarovka? [рукописно: Bronzed statues]
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Коротко: учить все шесть абзацев дословно не нужно — достаточно вынести из них 6 микротем и в каждой запомнить «тема + один факт (цифра, имя, пример)». Первый текст (фото 1) — это общее вступление, страницы 42–43 — те же мысли подробно, с готовыми заголовками: Supermarkets, Department stores, Malls, Opening hours, Markets, Brands.
Каркас пересказа (1,5–2 минуты)
Вступление: Belarus has shops of all kinds: large malls, department stores, markets and fairs. Tourists often come for shopping too.
- Supermarkets — big chains: Green, Euroopt, Gippo, Korona, Sosedi; they sell Belarusian products and imported food.
- Department stores — GUM, TSUM and Nemiga in Minsk; over 70 % of goods there are Belarusian brands.
- Malls — Arena City, Dana Mall, Galileo, Gallery Minsk; you can shop, eat at food courts, watch films, go skating or bowling.
- Opening hours — seven days a week, usually 9 a.m. – 9 p.m., malls till 10 p.m.; in small towns many shops close on Sundays.
- Markets — Komarovka in Minsk is the landmark: fresh food, a unique building and bronze statues in front of it.
- Brands and souvenirs — Elema, Kupalinka, Svitanak (clothes), Marko, Belvest (shoes), Krystal, Zorka (jewellery), Bielita, Markel, LuxVisage (cosmetics), Spartak and Kommunarka (chocolate). Souvenirs: dolls in national costumes, hand-painted wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins.
Что обычно спрашивает учитель
| Вопрос | Короткий ответ |
|---|---|
| What types of shops are there in Belarus? | Malls, department stores, supermarkets, markets and fairs. |
| What are the most popular places for buying food? | Supermarkets and markets. |
| Name the biggest supermarket chains. | Green, Euroopt, Gippo, Korona, Sosedi. |
| What are the three central department stores in Minsk? | GUM, TSUM and Nemiga. |
| What country are 70 % of TSUM goods made in? | In Belarus. |
| What can you do in a mall besides shopping? | Food courts, cinemas, skating rinks, bowling, carting, concerts, art spaces. |
| Do shops work on holidays? | Yes, they do — they rarely close. |
| What time do most malls close? | At 10 p.m. |
| What city is Gallery Grand in? | In Brest. |
| Why is Komarovka famous? | It is a huge food market with a unique building and bronze statues. |
| What souvenirs do tourists buy? | Dolls in national costumes, wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins. |
Проверка твоих ответов
Ответы в задании b) верные: 1) supermarkets and markets; 2) in Belarus (в тексте: over 70 % of goods sold in the state department stores are Belarusian brands); 3) in Brest; 4) yes, they do (they rarely close for holidays); 5) at 10 p.m.; 6) bronze statues. На фото 2 заголовок Supermarkets тоже выбран правильно — это вариант G.
Принцип, чтобы так же сжать любой текст
- Абзац = одна мысль. Первое предложение обычно её и называет — из него получается заголовок.
- Оставь одну «якорную» деталь: цифру (70 %, 9 a.m. – 9 p.m.), имя (Komarovka, GUM) или пример (chocolate — Spartak, Kommunarka). Детали без цифры и имени в пересказе не нужны.
- Проверка: закрой текст и скажи про абзац одно предложение. Получилось — факт выбран удачно; не получилось — ты взял слишком мелкую подробность.
Обсуждение
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Сделай пересказ самого нужного только сдесь
Короткий пересказ (6 предложений — по одному на абзац):
People come to Belarus to see its architecture, culture, nature and sport, and holidays here can also include a good shopping programme. Belarus has shops of all kinds: large malls, department stores, markets and fairs. In Minsk there are popular shopping centres such as GUM, TsUM, Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall and Arena City — they sell everything from socks to dictionaries. For more traditional shopping you can go to a local market; the most popular is Komarovsky Market in Minsk, one of the city's oldest food markets. Tourists often buy Belarusian brands: clothes, shoes, cosmetics, home textiles, sweets and drinks, and two well-known chocolate brands are Kommunarka and Spartak. Traditional souvenirs are dolls in national costumes, hand-painted wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins.
Совсем коротко (30 секунд):
Belarus has shops of all kinds — malls, department stores, markets and fairs. In Minsk the popular ones are GUM, TsUM, Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall and Arena City. For traditional shopping people go to Komarovsky Market, one of the oldest food markets in Minsk. Tourists buy Belarusian brands (clothes, shoes, cosmetics, sweets — Kommunarka and Spartak chocolate) and traditional souvenirs: dolls in national costumes, wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins.
Что обязательно назвать, если спросят:
- магазины Минска: GUM, TsUM, Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall, Arena City;
- рынок: Komarovsky Market — один из старейших продуктовых;
- шоколад: Kommunarka и Spartak;
- сувениры: dolls in national costumes, wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins.
Как учить: закрой текст и по очереди скажи одно предложение на каждый пункт — магазины → рынок → бренды → сувениры. Если на каком-то пункте запнулся, перечитай только один абзац, а не весь текст.
Пересказ только по этому тексту (≈110 слов, на 1 минуту)
People come to Belarus to see its unique architecture, learn about the culture, enjoy nature and watch top sports competitions. Shopping can also be part of a holiday here.
Belarus has shops of all kinds: large malls, department stores, markets and fairs. In Minsk the most popular shopping centres are GUM, TsUM, Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall and Arena City — they sell everything from socks to dictionaries.
For traditional shopping people go to local markets. The most popular is Komarovsky Market in Minsk, one of the city's oldest food markets.
Tourists often buy Belarusian brands: clothes, shoes, cosmetics, home textiles, sweets and drinks. The best-known chocolate brands are Kommunarka and Spartak.
Traditional souvenirs are dolls in national costumes, hand-painted wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins.
Совсем короткий вариант (3 предложения)
Belarus has shops of all kinds — malls, department stores, markets and fairs. In Minsk you can shop in GUM, TsUM, Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall and Arena City, or visit Komarovsky Market, one of the oldest food markets. Tourists buy Belarusian brands and traditional souvenirs, and the most famous chocolate brands are Kommunarka and Spartak.
Что обязательно запомнить (имена и факты)
- Магазины: GUM, TsUM (department stores), Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall, Arena City (malls).
- Рынок: Komarovsky Market — один из старейших продуктовых рынков Минска.
- Шоколад: Kommunarka и Spartak.
- Сувениры: куклы в национальных костюмах, расписные деревянные игрушки и ложки, скатерти и салфетки.
Принцип сжатия: абзац = одна мысль. Берёшь из него только имена собственные и обобщение («shops of all kinds», «Belarusian brands»), а перечисления типа «socks to dictionaries» оставляешь как одну яркую деталь — она показывает объём выбора.
Подели на обзац
В этом тексте уже 6 абзацев. Вот где проходят границы — если у тебя текст идёт сплошняком, дели именно так (каждый новый абзац — с красной строки).
1. Зачем едут в Беларусь
People come to Belarus to see unique architecture, learn about the Belarusian culture, enjoy the nature and see top sports competitions. In addition, holidays in Belarus can include a good shopping programme.
Мысль: туризм + шопинг как часть отдыха.
2. Какие бывают магазины
Belarus has shops of all kinds: large malls, department stores, markets, and fairs.
Мысль: перечисление типов магазинов — это как «оглавление» всего текста.
3. Торговые центры Минска
In Minsk there are some popular shopping malls that offer a wide choice of goods: the famous GUM and TsUM department stores, Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall, Arena City shopping centres, etc. They sell everything from socks to dictionaries.
Мысль: конкретные названия + ассортимент «от носков до словарей».
4. Рынки
For more traditional shopping, go to one of the many local markets. The most popular is Komarovsky Market in Minsk, one of the city's oldest food markets.
Мысль: переход к традиционной торговле → Комаровка.
5. Белорусские бренды
Tourists often buy Belarusian brands known for their high quality. They include clothes, shoes, cosmetics, home textiles, sweets and local Belarusian drinks. Two well-known brands making chocolates are Kommunarka and Spartak.
Мысль: что покупают + два бренда шоколада.
6. Сувениры
Traditional souvenirs include dolls in national costumes, hand-painted wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins.
Мысль: что везут на память.
Проверка: если в твоём варианте абзацев получилось 5 или 7 — скорее всего, ты склеил пункты 1–2 или разбил пункт 5 (в нём три предложения об одном и том же: качество → товары → шоколад, это один абзац).
Для пересказа по абзацам достаточно одной фразы на каждый: зачем едут → какие магазины → ТЦ Минска → Комаровка → бренды и шоколад → сувениры.
Можешь 3-6 немного укоротить
Абзацы 3–6 в укороченном виде (1–2 идут без изменений):
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In Minsk there are popular shopping malls: the famous GUM and TsUM department stores, Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall and Arena City. They sell everything from socks to dictionaries.
4.
For traditional shopping, go to local markets. The most popular is Komarovsky Market in Minsk, one of the city's oldest food markets.
5.
Tourists buy Belarusian brands: clothes, shoes, cosmetics, textiles, sweets and drinks. The best-known chocolate brands are Kommunarka and Spartak.
6.
Traditional souvenirs include dolls in national costumes, wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins.
Весь текст целиком после сокращения
People come to Belarus to see unique architecture, learn about the Belarusian culture, enjoy the nature and see top sports competitions. In addition, holidays in Belarus can include a good shopping programme.
Belarus has shops of all kinds: large malls, department stores, markets, and fairs.
In Minsk there are popular shopping malls: the famous GUM and TsUM department stores, Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall and Arena City. They sell everything from socks to dictionaries.
For traditional shopping, go to local markets. The most popular is Komarovsky Market in Minsk, one of the city's oldest food markets.
Tourists buy Belarusian brands: clothes, shoes, cosmetics, textiles, sweets and drinks. The best-known chocolate brands are Kommunarka and Spartak.
Traditional souvenirs include dolls in national costumes, wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins.
Что я убрал и почему это не потеря важного
- «that offer a wide choice of goods», «etc.» — общие слова, названия магазинов уже показывают выбор;
- «known for their high quality» — оценка, а не факт; перечисление товаров говорит само за себя;
- «home textiles» → «textiles», «local Belarusian drinks» → «drinks» — смысл тот же, слов меньше;
- «hand-painted» — красивая деталь, но для пересказа необязательна.
Если нужно ещё короче — скажи, сожму до одного предложения на абзац.
Так ты ничего не изменил сделай по короче
Справедливо — в прошлый раз я убрал только пару слов, текст почти не изменился. Теперь режу по-настоящему.
Вариант «минимум» — 6 строк, по одному предложению на абзац (≈60 слов вместо ≈140)
- People come to Belarus for its architecture, culture, nature, sport and shopping.
- There are shops of all kinds: malls, department stores, markets and fairs.
- Minsk has GUM, TsUM, Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall and Arena City — they sell everything from socks to dictionaries.
- For traditional shopping go to Komarovsky Market, one of the oldest food markets in Minsk.
- Tourists buy Belarusian clothes, shoes, cosmetics, sweets and drinks; the famous chocolate brands are Kommunarka and Spartak.
- Souvenirs are dolls in national costumes, wooden toys, spoons, tablecloths and napkins.
Всё это можно сказать и без нумерации — просто шесть предложений подряд, это уже готовый пересказ.
Что именно я сократил (сравнение с твоим текстом)
| Абзац | Было | Стало |
|---|---|---|
| 1 | to see unique architecture, learn about the Belarusian culture, enjoy the nature and see top sports competitions… good shopping programme | for its architecture, culture, nature, sport and shopping |
| 2 | Belarus has shops of all kinds | There are shops of all kinds (без «Belarus») |
| 3 | In Minsk there are some popular shopping malls that offer a wide choice of goods: the famous GUM and TsUM department stores… | Minsk has GUM, TsUM… (убрал «offer a wide choice of goods») |
| 4 | For more traditional shopping, go to one of the many local markets. The most popular is Komarovsky Market in Minsk, one of the city's oldest food markets | одна фраза про Комаровку, без «many local markets» |
| 5 | known for their high quality… home textiles, sweets and local Belarusian drinks… Two well-known brands making chocolates are… | убрал «high quality», «home», «local», «two well-known brands making chocolates» |
| 6 | hand-painted wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins | wooden toys, spoons, tablecloths, napkins |
Если нужно ещё короче — 3 предложения (≈35 слов)
Belarus has shops of all kinds: malls, department stores, markets and fairs, and in Minsk the most popular are GUM, TsUM, Nemiga, Dana Mall and Arena City. For traditional shopping people go to Komarovsky Market. Tourists buy Belarusian brands — Kommunarka and Spartak chocolate — and souvenirs like dolls in national costumes and wooden toys.
Учить лучше первый вариант: одно предложение = один абзац, так проще не сбиться.
6 ещё короче
6-й абзац — три варианта, от короткого к самому короткому:
- Souvenirs are dolls, wooden toys, spoons, tablecloths and napkins. (10 слов)
- Popular souvenirs are dolls, wooden toys and tablecloths. (8 слов)
- Souvenirs are dolls, toys and tablecloths. (6 слов)
Весь пересказ с самым коротким 6-м пунктом:
- People come to Belarus for its architecture, culture, nature, sport and shopping.
- There are shops of all kinds: malls, department stores, markets and fairs.
- Minsk has GUM, TsUM, Nemiga, Stolitsa, Dana Mall and Arena City.
- For traditional shopping go to Komarovsky Market, one of the oldest food markets in Minsk.
- Tourists buy Belarusian clothes, shoes, cosmetics, sweets and drinks; the chocolate brands are Kommunarka and Spartak.
- Souvenirs are dolls, toys and tablecloths.
Что убрал в 6-м: in national costumes (уточнение к куклам), hand-painted (уточнение к игрушкам), spoons, napkins (часть перечисления). Смысл сохранился: сувениры — это куклы, игрушки и текстиль. Если учитель спросит подробнее, всегда можно добавить: dolls in national costumes, wooden toys and spoons, tablecloths and napkins.
